I'm reading this again, and I swear everytime it gets better. I should probably get to reading some of other routes.
Have you ever thought about posting "our journey" to quotev.
It a website where x readers and 2nd person stories are popular and thrive.
I highly suggest that you should post this story there. You deserve so much exposure over there instead of some what small exposure you get on deviant art.
Please consider this. I really love your stories, and want to share my love of them with a website that will love them back.